mot ([info]symmys) wrote,
@ 2006-11-04 14:34:00
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Song-A-Week Project Weeks 18,19,20: So Sad, Moonscape, Read Every Night
Here, at long last, are Song-a-week Project Weeks 18,19,20: So Sad, Moonscape, and Read Every Night

18: So sad October 9th A blues about how sometimes everyday stuff can seem really sad. This song sports my lovely keyboard with some organ to back up the usual harp and guitar.
Download as: ogg mp3 flac or Soundclick page with lyrics and streaming audio

19: Moonscape October 15th-ish
This is a song about Roethke's paintings. In particular, it's a song about some monochrome grey paintings he did ~1970 shortly before his suicide. The basic idea I got from K -- it's the idea that those canvasses are a kind of eerie echo of the images of the moonlanding that were on TV throughout 1969, hence the first line -- "1969, your color TV turned black-and-white."
Download as: mp3 ogg flac or Soundclick page with lyrics and streaming audio

20: Read every night October 23rd
This is a song about a romance of taste, and about the way falling for someone gets entangled with falling for what they read and listen to. For me, this is the quintessential teen love song (everything the characters read and listen to is stuff I was exposed to first in high school...). For me, the real point of the song is to get at that intense sense of newness that teenage romance has (or should have), and to focus on the intellectual side of it, because god knows the other side has been done to death.

If the recording sounds like it has too much reverb, just take that as extra romance. I believe this may be the first time anyone has sung "lately I've been into the metaphysical poets" with such an air of sappiness... this song also has a country-song style super-saccharine twist in the last verse, which is my attempt to end it (truth be told, I still don't feel this song is finished, but so it goes with a song-a-week project).

Download as: mp3 ogg flac or Soundclick page with lyrics and streaming audio



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[info]drlynch
2006-11-07 01:35 am UTC (link)
i think moonscape is your best so far. K deserves credit for a really good song ;)

as to read every night, i think the concept was better than the song? maybe i thought it would be more of a falling-in-love-with-intellect song (which isn´t just the domain of teenagers)--more of the ilk of lucinda williams' "something about what happens when we talk" or nando reis' "all star" (the cynical falling-out-of-love song would be paul simon´s "dangling conversation"). anyway, i think you have something there but think you´re right that it isn´t finished. also, how many people actually meet at the barnes & noble?

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[info]symmys
2006-11-07 01:48 am UTC (link)
Glad you like moonscape. I go back and forth because I think the melody's too high for my voice, but maybe I'll go ahead and try that out at open mic tomorrow night.

You're right about the reading song -- it may be that the whole thing doesn't work or it may be that I took it in the wrong direction or need to come back to it. The lines I actually started with were just typical teen stuff -- "You two don't talk every night / but when you do my god you hold on tight / you stay on the line / until you're both out cold." That stuff is pure teen (and pure teen of our generation -- my students don't ever stay "on the line" now that they have cell phones), but didn't fit into where the song ended up going.

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[info]drlynch
2006-11-07 10:30 am UTC (link)
have you considered changing the key?

so much has changed about phone culture... just on sunday, i was chiding my grandmother for not getting skype yet by telling her that she misses out on our family phone date on thursdays.

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[info]symmys
2006-11-07 11:12 am UTC (link)
Yeah, it's in a bad place on the guitar for that, though I suppose that's not really an excuse... the descending line requires it to be in a certain place... it would be easy to raise a step or two (which is the same as lowering six or seven steps of course, but that felt like overkill). Maybe I'll give it another shot though...

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[info]drlynch
2006-11-07 05:15 pm UTC (link)
the appropriate response from you might have been "who in the hell are you to give me advice about my songs? do you know ANYTHING about music? no."

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[info]kimberkit
2007-01-26 05:00 pm UTC (link)
I rather like the moonscape one -- great lyrics.

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